Sit in a Sunbeam

Sit in a Sunbeam
Dennis Teitelbaum

Tuesday, May 6, 2008

Dennis writes a Poem




To Daisy

Daisy, you say you prefer Skeezix
But I could give you cheese sticks!


That's all Dennis has so far.

29 comments:

Daisy said...

Oh Dennis, you are so creative! I am going to write a poem for you now, too:

While cheese sticks in the tummy,
are sounding mightily yummy
I have a big, round hangy-belly,
that's soft and squishy like jelly
While fattening snacks I must decline,
I find Dennis' friendship most divine!

tony said...

A Feline Robert Frost!!!!!

Catlin said...

Hahahaha, you and Daisy crack me up. It's a good thing you're hooking up, dude.

Anonymous said...

That is a nice poem for Daisy. Cheese sticks sound very yummy.

Phyllis Hunt McGowan said...

Is this a literary mewsing?
Sorry, I couldn't resist. This blog is too funny.

JEWELGIRL said...

Tanks for stopping by and wishing
mez a Happy Birthday!
House Panther - Spooky Do.
The rest of my cat family is at
sandwichedmom.blogspot.com

R.L. Bourges said...

oh. and ooh. and awwww. And the little pic of Daisy. oy. the strings they snap in my heart, Dennis.

Try a bit of French with Daisy. Suave like this:

"le chat de la voisine
qui mange de la bonne cuisine
et fait ses petits ron-ron
sur un bel édredon"

(it's a song but you don't have to tell her, no I won't tell her either)

P.S. May I blogroll you now that you are a poet?

mouse (aka kimy) said...

absolutely brilliant poem...completely sublime.

if this doesn't win daisy's heart, than she's not worthy....

Black Cat said...

That's just so cute Dennis. I can see from her comment that Daisy values your friendship:) xxx

Gary said...

A wonderful beginning...

Mickey's Musings said...

OOoooooooooooooo,this is gonna be fun to watch ;)
Dennis vs Skeezix,heh,heh,heh
Purrs Mickey

lettuce said...

fishes and wishes rhyme quite well

bitchlet said...

O.o

Is Dennis thinking about Daisy?

Irishcoda said...

How cute! We enjoy reading Daisy's blog too and we know that Daisy is a terrific kitty, maybe you can win her over! :)

Coffee Messiah said...

Nice one.....and sometimes, less is more! ; )

Toffee K. Ripple Fuzzypants & Feline American Angels said...

Oh, goodness! Does Skeezy know about this crush you have on his lady love? I fear that he might break out his ginormous mussels an' stuff might happen.
Be careful, Dennis!

DMM

Karen Jo said...

That's a nice poem you wrote for Daisy, Dennis. I wish you luck, but I think Daisy and Skeezix are firmly engaged.

hpy said...

Oh Dennis!

dennis said...

Daisy, I like your squishy belly --I love you just the way you are, you are beautiful, mon petit cherie.

ANGEL ABBYGRACE said...

Dennis
You are furry handsome...this is our first visit to your bloggie...both my sisfur and I are tuxies too. It is furry nice to meetcha.

Purrs
Abby and Boo

meemsnyc said...

That is so cute that you have a crush on Daisy. Dennis, we like the start of the poem.

dennis said...

Dennis is in a complete Daze over Daisy...he can't eat (much) or blog, he just wants to Daisydream...er Daydream about Dennis & Daisy... Daisy N' Dennis

Parker said...

Daisy is a lovely cat, I really can't blame you for having a big ol' crush on her!

Marie-Noyale said...

Don't want to wake Dennis up from his beautiful "Daisy N Dennis"dreams... so I'll be very quiet...
...Thanks for your birthday wishes...

Mr. Hendrix said...

aw Dennis, that is sweet you like Daisy so much. i hope you are ok with being just friends with her. she is a very easy kitty to get captivated with!

Angel MoMo and Charlotte said...

Dennis - you do have to get a move on. Two lines!

Seriously, Daisy is a cutie and I don't blame you for being in love with her!

Flawed And Disorderly said...

Haaaaaaaa! That poem was awesome! This blog rocks! Jennifer likes it!

Diane Dehler said...

Dennis, I think you could take your poetry to a new level. You need to write from your authentic "inner cat" though. Perhaps a creative writing workshop for rogue felines.

Pink said...

Dennis, man! Get a grip. You've gotta play hard to get. Treat em mean and keep em kean, dude.
xx
pinks